高分作文写作要领——逻辑严谨 内容连贯
无论是英语还是汉语，文章都要求条理清楚，思路清晰，意思明确，表达连贯。但是，英语与汉语在段落的安排上，还是有一些差别的。大多数英语文章的思路遵循演绎式，呈总-分-总或总-分结构；在段落内部的组织上，英语的段落要求一段一意，即"单一性原则"。而很多汉语文章的思路遵循归纳式，呈分-总结构，汉语的段落没有严格的要求，可以一段多意或一意多段，性之所至，挥洒自如。
例证分析：
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
(2002.1 CET-4 & CET-6)
January 12th,2002
Dear Mr.President,
I am an ordinary undergraduate majoring in Chinese in our university. My name is Li Ming. Since our university holds about 10,000 undergraduates and 2,000 postgraduates, the three meals in daily life become the most urgent concern. I'm obliged to write to you about the canteen service on campus. (表明目的，提出主题)
Every coin has its two sides, so does the canteen service. As is known to all, the canteen was redecorated last month. Now it becomes magnificent both inside and outside. We are bathed in pleasure and pride in such striking architecture. To be frank, foods and dishes of higher quality are available. Besides, the services are also improved. At the same time, the prices have risen so considerably that they have aggravated the poorer students' burden. A few of my classmates who come from the remote mountainous areas have to feed chiefly on staple food. In the long run it will do a great harm to their health and even hinder their studies. We agree that a university canteen should not aim at earning money by means of raising prices. In my opinion, the canteen should try to lower the cost so as to serve all the students. (反映情况，指明问题)
Such is the truth about the canteen service on campus. In this way you will have a clear idea of the work concerned. I am looking forward to your reply. (呼应主题，表达希望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
本文一开始即自我介绍，然后直入主题，说明写信的目的是反映有关食堂的问题；接着作者在第二段从几个角度反映情况，既有表扬也有批评，包括其装修、饭菜质量、服务质量和价格问题。结尾段，作者呼应主题，并表达建议和希望。这篇作文思路清晰，内容连贯，逻辑严谨，首尾呼应，是典型的总-分-总结构。
在英语写作中，中国学生应该有意识地采用英语思维方式，按照演绎式组织段落，段落内部要遵守单一性原则，按照时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑关系、重要性排序或对比、比较、分类、说明等手段，以主题句-扩展句-结论句组织段落，达到表达清晰、逻辑严谨、内容连贯的目标。
例证分析：
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
(2002.1 CET-4 & CET-6)
January 12th,2002
Dear Mr.President,
I am an ordinary undergraduate majoring in Chinese in our university. My name is Li Ming. Since our university holds about 10,000 undergraduates and 2,000 postgraduates, the three meals in daily life become the most urgent concern. I'm obliged to write to you about the canteen service on campus. (表明目的，提出主题)
Every coin has its two sides, so does the canteen service. As is known to all, the canteen was redecorated last month. Now it becomes magnificent both inside and outside. We are bathed in pleasure and pride in such striking architecture. To be frank, foods and dishes of higher quality are available. Besides, the services are also improved. At the same time, the prices have risen so considerably that they have aggravated the poorer students' burden. A few of my classmates who come from the remote mountainous areas have to feed chiefly on staple food. In the long run it will do a great harm to their health and even hinder their studies. We agree that a university canteen should not aim at earning money by means of raising prices. In my opinion, the canteen should try to lower the cost so as to serve all the students. (反映情况，指明问题)
Such is the truth about the canteen service on campus. In this way you will have a clear idea of the work concerned. I am looking forward to your reply. (呼应主题，表达希望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
本文一开始即自我介绍，然后直入主题，说明写信的目的是反映有关食堂的问题；接着作者在第二段从几个角度反映情况，既有表扬也有批评，包括其装修、饭菜质量、服务质量和价格问题。结尾段，作者呼应主题，并表达建议和希望。这篇作文思路清晰，内容连贯，逻辑严谨，首尾呼应，是典型的总-分-总结构。
在英语写作中，中国学生应该有意识地采用英语思维方式，按照演绎式组织段落，段落内部要遵守单一性原则，按照时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑关系、重要性排序或对比、比较、分类、说明等手段，以主题句-扩展句-结论句组织段落，达到表达清晰、逻辑严谨、内容连贯的目标。
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